breyzyyin: (Yin: I want to believe in the future)
breyzyyin ([personal profile] breyzyyin) wrote in [personal profile] inked_eidolon 2013-07-17 06:27 pm (UTC)

I'm glad to see another chapter up, even if it took me a bit longer to read it due to silly time constraints! I really like your description and dialogue in your stories, and the character interactions in this chapter were pretty neat...I loved the dynamic between Lenna and Jenica during their interactions, and Faris' response to Lenna's talk with her and how both characters later on interacted and felt as a result of that was really realistic and believable given the situation. I'll be looking forward to seeing what happens next...great chapter, as always! ♥ :D

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